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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 3

Describe your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from the lessons, describe your trip to work or school. How long does it take to get there? How far do you have to go? How much does it cost?

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my family have 3 people,my father,my mother and me.my father work at the Beijing Organizing Committee olympic,and my mother is a chartered accountant.i don't have any sisters or brothers.
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  • Booleanboy
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    Hi! Here's how I would write your exercise: My family has 3 people in it, my father, my mother and me. My father works at the Beijing Olympic Organizing Committee and my mother is a chartered accountant. I don't have any brothers or sisters. Hope this helps!
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  • Kaushik Nandi
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    Please use capital letters. / My father works at the Beijing Olympic organizing committee. Anyways.. Good Work. :)
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  • joleran
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    You need to look at capitalization and spacing mostly. Here's how I would write this: "My family has 3 people: my father, my mother, and myself. My father works at the Beijing Organizing Committee for the Olympics, and my mother is a chartered accountant. I don't have any sisters or brothers."
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  • Haman. Lew
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    GOOD
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  • xkosmatou
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    Don't forget: Capital letters at the beginning of each sentence! Nice try! work--> works (3rd person)
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  • Feng Huang
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    There are 3 people in my immediate family. This includes my father, my mother and me. My father works at the Beijing Olympic Organizing Committee. My mother is a chartered accountant. I am an only child. I don't have any sisters or brothers.
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  • gloren ruth
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    I agree with their comments...

    zhu fu ni!
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  • Allonon85
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    Booleanboy states it perfectly.

     

    Keep it up
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  • samir
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    good attemet
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  • 吳嘯龍
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    and I.
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  • hanshuai
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    hao
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  • Julian
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    Very good

    well done :)
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  • gul
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    My family has 3 people in it. Me, my father and my mother. My father work at Beijing olympic Organizing Committee and my mother is a chartered accountant. I don't have any siblings.

     

    :)
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