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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

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A women and a man,a boy,a girl you and i .that boy very young and tall
Submitted over a year ago

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  • sunny
    Mochapoints: 4670  |  Teacher Score: 1058

    you should try to say like that :

    The women is very tall and young.

    The girl is very pretty and young、

    、、、、、、、

    try to writer  more sentence .don't worried  about your mistake . and it is only a good way to improve your english .

     

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • nicko 윤시혜
    Mochapoints: 24251  |  Teacher Score: 18566 (98%)

    u need to introduce yourself here including yr name, where are u from, occupation/ job, etc.

    eg:

    My name is Jesse. I'm from China. I am a student. My hobby is playing computer games. etc.

     

    keep it up^^jia you^^

    Submitted over a year ago
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