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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 2

Running Errands

Instructions: Write about a set of errands you have to do. Where do you need to go? When? With who?

João Manoel's submission: Average Rating:
Tomorrow I go to church with my girlfriend , At night I go to party with my brothers , In the next weekend I go to cinema with my girlfriend and her friends , In the morning I go to grocery store for shopping , Tomorrow I go to with my father buy a car for me .
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  • Vimiew
    Mochapoints: 3766  |  Teacher Score: 1502 (0%)
    Good Job.... a few things to look at.... Tomorrow I go to church with my girlfriend. At night, I go to party with my brothers. Next weekend, I go to the cinema with my girlfriend and her friends. In the morning, I go to grocery store to shop. Tomorrow, I go to with my father buy a car for me. Keep up the good work!
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  • Vani
    Mochapoints: 6301  |  Teacher Score: 3428 (100%)
    good!
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  • TheNightmareSto...
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    Great! Tomorrow I'm going to church with my girlfriend. At night I'm going to a party with my brothers. On the weekend I'm going to the cinema with my girlfriend and her friends. In the morning I'm going to go to the grocery store to shop. Tomorrow I'm going with my father to buy a car for me.
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  • Sam Peters
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    Very good. Tomorrow I am going to Church with my girlfriend. At night I am going to a party with my brothers. On the weekend I am going to the cinema with my girlfriend and her friends. In the morning I will go shopping at the grocery store. Tomorrow I will go to see my father, he is going to buy me a car.
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  • Robert
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    Oy Joao! You're in the future imperfect here - actions that will happen but haven't happened yet - so, "Tomorrow, I WILL go to church with my girlfriend. At night, I WILL go to A (you need the indefinite article) with my brothers. "Next weekend, (if you say "In the next weekend, you're making a metaphysical leap in English: you are literally becoming part of (in) the time!) I WILL go to THE cinema (definite article here) with my girlfriend and her friends (hope you're prepared for the movie version of "Sex in the City" a total chick flick). In the morning, I WILL go to THE grocery store TO DO some shopping. Tomorrow, I WILL go with my father TO buy a car for me."
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  • Vani
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    I totally agree with Robert!!! Vani.
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