Going Shopping
Instructions:
Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4
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When I went the shoping, I was looking for a shoes, but I got a new sport shoes. They cost 500 mexican pesos. The price is good becouse it was so confortable!.
I bougth a new game console, the price was in 2000 mexican pesos. I buogth many games, one aditional control and a memory card for it. I was selecting some clothes for my sister. I choose one swater , For this swater I payed 250 mexican pesos. It was nice and was blue!.
But I cant advise that the car was parking in a wrong place. The police officer pickup my car and when i returned, my car was gone. :(
I had to found it in the parking lot of the police.
I spent my money in the market. And I did not have all the documents in that moment to tramited the pass out!
I had to wait one day more :P
The debt was 570 mexican pesos. :( That day was unexpected!
Thank my friend to read this! :) keep smiling!
I bougth a new game console, the price was in 2000 mexican pesos. I buogth many games, one aditional control and a memory card for it. I was selecting some clothes for my sister. I choose one swater , For this swater I payed 250 mexican pesos. It was nice and was blue!.
But I cant advise that the car was parking in a wrong place. The police officer pickup my car and when i returned, my car was gone. :(
I had to found it in the parking lot of the police.
I spent my money in the market. And I did not have all the documents in that moment to tramited the pass out!
I had to wait one day more :P
The debt was 570 mexican pesos. :( That day was unexpected!
Thank my friend to read this! :) keep smiling!
Submitted over a year ago
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NiaraMochapoints: 26313 | Teacher Score: 12391 (100%)Qué malo, amigo.. :( Podría comprar más uno zapato bonito con el dinero del boleto (que también es muy caro acá en Brasil)! :P Por lo menos, escribes muy bien el inglés! Luego ganará muchas platas y los 570 no te haran falta! jeje :D Hasta pronto, Salvador! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
YolandaMochapoints: 1374 | Teacher Score: 292 (0%)Haha, so unexpected experience. Good luck to you! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
JuanitaMochapoints: 3634 | Teacher Score: 553When I went TO Do the shopPing, I was looking for shoes, but I got (FOUND?) a new sport shoes. They cost 500 mexican pesos. The price is good becAuse it was so coMfortable!. I bougHT a new game console. IT COST 2000 mexican pesos. I bOUGHT many games, one aDditional control and a memory card for it. I was selecting (CHOOSING) some clothes for my sister. I choose one swEater. I paIEd for it 250 mexican pesos. It IS nice and blue SWEATER!. But WNEN I CAME BACK I HAD NOTICED that the car was parking in a wrong place. The police officer pickED up my car and when I returned, my car wasN’T THERE. :( I had to fIND it in the POLICE parking. I spent my money in the market. And I did not have all the documents in that moment to tramited the pass out! I had to wait one day more :P The debt was 570 mexican pesos. :( That day was unexpected! Thank my friend to read this! :) keep smiling! :-) :-) :-) :-) Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate -
Gina ZhangMochapoints: 220 | Teacher Score: 51 (0%)When I went TO DO the shopPing, I was looking for shoes, but I FOUND a PAIR OF new sport shoes. They cost 500 mexican pesos. The price is good becAuse it was so coMfortable!. I bougHT a new game console, IT COST 2000 mexican pesos. I buogHT many games, one adDitional control and a memory card for it. I was selecting some clothes for my sister. I chose one swEater , For this swEater I paID 250 mexican pesos. It was nice and was blue!. But I WASN'T NOTICED that the car was parking in a wrong place. The police officer pickED up my car and when I returned, my car was gone. :( I had to fIND it in the parking lot of the police. I spent my money in the market. And I did not have all the documents AT that moment to traSmit the pass out! I had to wait one day more :P The debt was 570 mexican pesos. :( That day was unexpected!(THAT WAS A UNEXPECTED DAY!) Thank my friend to read this! :) keep smilEing! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
christyMochapoints: 452 | Teacher Score: 30 (0%)Well, your English is better than me , best wish to you! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
salvadorMochapoints: 7870 | Teacher Score: 6162 (100%)Great my friends.. Thanks a lot! :) Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
NickyMochapoints: 3863 | Teacher Score: 2541 (0%)When I went shopping, I was looking for some shoes, but decided to by some trainers(sports shoes). The price was good because they were so comfortable! I bought a new games console, the price was 2000 Mexican pesos. I bought lots of games, one additional control ... I chose one sweater. It cost 250 Mexican pesos. It was a nice blue one! I hadn't noticed that the car was parked in the wrong place. The police officer had picked up my car so when I returned, my car had gone. I had to find it in the police parking lot. I had spent all my money in the market, also I did not have all the documents with me at that moment to transmit the pass out! (thanks my friends for reading this! :) That was a fantastic effort!! well done!! I have corrected the sentences that had misakes. Just compare them! Well done 007!! Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate -
MériMochapoints: 7997 | Teacher Score: 4237 (75%)"When I went TO DO shopping, I was looking for SOME ( - no indefinite article) shoes, THEN I FOUND (- no article) sport shoes. " "coMfortable" "bouGHT" "IT COST 2000 mexican pesos" "adDitional" "I was CHOOSING" " I CHOSE one swEater" "I PAID" "It was A nice blue sweater" "The police officer HAD pickED UP my car, and when I returned, my car WASN'T THERE" (I had to FIND it in the police STATION" "I HAD SPENT ALL my money in the market AND I didn't have all the documents AT THAT moment to TRAMSMIT the pass out. I had to wait ONE MORE DAY." Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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