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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

Dmitry's submission: Average Rating:
I'm going to the park. I would like to read my book, or to run.
I like to run. The park have some bench. Sometimes I want to sit on bench. It is heat. It is good. I like the summer and the park of the summer.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • davids
    Mochapoints: 24490  |  Teacher Score: 20765 (97%)
    very good&good luck my friend
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  • Isa
    Mochapoints: 3122  |  Teacher Score: 394 (0%)
    Good! A few corrections: The park *has* some *benches* Sometimes I want to sit on *the* bench. It is *hot*. I like the summer and the park *in* the summer.
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  • allegro24dreame...
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    Good job! Pay attention to Isa's corrections, and you will master these sort of questions...
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