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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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When i go to the park, i usually sleep in the grass. I love looking at the sky. But last time i went to the park with some friends, we played football.
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  • Aubergine1
    Mochapoints: 3729  |  Teacher Score: 1419 (100%)

    Pas mal. J'ai vu des problems avec "i" pourquoi est-ce qu'il n'est pas majiscule? Fait attention avec grammaire anglais car je vois que vous pouvez epeler les mots tres bien. Si vous regardez la questionne vous pouvez voir bien qu'il demande une response au present. Votre troisieme phrase est au passe compose. En plus on commence pas des phrase avec "But" en anglais. J'espere que ca vous aide.
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