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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 4

Describing People and Objects

Instructions: Describe people and objects, including both singular and plural forms. Use both positive and negative statements. Ex. We are women. We are not men. This is a gold coin. These are not yellow flowers.

Joselia Almeida's submission: Average Rating:
These car's man are not red. They are white. These flowers are not yellow. They are green. These wallat are not brown. They are black. The tree is not porple. They is a red. A building and a girl. A boyl and cars.
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  • Rajan
    Mochapoints: 1890  |  Teacher Score: 1030
    Hi Joselia, how r u? Well i would not say that it was a good submission but i would definitely say that it was a good try. But there are quiet a few mistakes. In first line; The man`s car is not red, it is white. In other sentence: These wallets are not brown. ( cause you are taking about more then one wallet, so you should use wallets not just wallet) Another line: The tree is not purple, it is red.( Although I have not heard about any purple or red tree). They is used for more then one people or things. and in your last two sentences you did not make a complete sentence: A building and a girl. A boy and cars. Here you have not mention any thing about them.You have just written a building, a girl, a boy and a car. You should have written something related to them as you did in previous sentences. And finally u made a spelling mistake: It is purple not porple. Anyways, keep practicing, u still have a long way to go. Best Wishes < Good Bye n Take Care >
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  • Richard
    Mochapoints: 21785  |  Teacher Score: 16624 (98%)
    Joselia, there are some problems with this exercise. Let's talk about it. The man's car is red. It is not white. The flowers are grren. They are not yellow. The wallets are black. They are not brown. The tree is green. It is not purple.
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