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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 5

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

Joselia Almeida's submission: Average Rating:
There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. It's black.
There are ten buildings. Three buildings are white. Seven buildings are not yellow. It is orange.
There are eight houses. One house is brown. Seven houses are not blue. It is white.
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  • Bob
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    they are black, they are orange
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  • Rajan
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    Hi Joselia, how r u? Well u did quiet a good job. There are few mistakes: Three buildings are not green, they are black. Seven buildings are not yellow, they are orange. In last line: Seven hoses are not blue, they are white. Well I did see quiet an improvement in your work from your last submissions, so that`s why I would Say you did a very good job. Keep it up. Best Wishes < Take Care >
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  • Rajan
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    Hi again Joselia. Well sorry I spelled House wrong: It`s houses not hoses. Take Care.
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  • mohammad
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    It is ---> They are very good job. Keep it up.
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