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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

sudhir's submission: Average Rating:
A woman is not fat .She is thin.A man is not rich. He is poor. A boy is not tall.he is short.A girl is not old.she is poor. You are not old.You are young.I am not young . i am old.
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  • ~CindyMama~
    Mochapoints: 3110  |  Teacher Score: 1701 (0%)

    Nice job! Here's how I would write it with spacing, caps, etc.:

    A woman is not fat. She is thin.

    A man is not rich. He is poor.

    A boy is not tall. He is short.

    A girl is not old. She is poor.

    You are not old. You are young.

    I am not young. I am old.

    You really did great :D Thank you for your feedback as well! I am happy to have your help!

    Submitted over a year ago
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