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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1

Describing your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?

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please, can you bring to me a coffee? and... a sandwich too.
My favorite drink is the screwdriver but it's not at the moment, it's very early. I love the Vodka!!!
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  • Julia
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    good. Put ``please`` at the end of the sentence in this case...............``but it`s not the right moment or - not now. ``I love vodka`` works too.
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  • Nabila
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    Generally ok, but can be re-witten in a different way. You should say this: "Could you bring me a coffee and a sandwich please" or: "May I have a coffee and a sandwich please" "...........but not at this time of the day" "I love Vodka" You should say which coffee you want: filter, espresso, capuccino, mocha, americano..... and which size: small, medium or large and you should say wich sandwich you want: for example "tuna salad sandwich" or "cheese and tomatoe sandwich" Also, you're at a cafe, so the drink you can order are soft drinks like fruit juice. Hope this helps!
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  • Jack Lee
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    Hey Diegus, Casi perfecto - una correccion - Please, can you bring me a coffee?, Jack
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  • Megan Jaramillo
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    vodka my favorite (lol) nice
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  • Gustavo
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    Please, can you bring to me a coffee? and.a sandwich? My favorite drink is the a screwdriver but it's not at the moment, it's very early. I love the Vodka!!!

    Here is a correct one ...

    Please, can you bring  me a coffee  and.a sandwich? My favorite drink is a Screwdriver but not at the moment, it's very early. I love Vodka!!!

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