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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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I am going to indiana on october 23, because I have to work there.
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  • Carolina
    Mochapoints: 623  |  Teacher Score: 9 (0%)
    Ismael creo que despues de going to debe ir un berbo que especifique lo que vas a hacer. October 23rd
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  • Drayton
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    Buenos Días, I am going to (Indiana) on (October) (23rd) because I have to work there. 1) Always capitalize months: January. February, March... 2) Also the names of cities.
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  • wisdomrules
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    Ismael, I want to give you a couple of pointers: 1) In English all proper nouns are capitalized. This includes the name of states.2) Also, there is no need for a comma. Good luck! I am going to Indiana* on October* 23rd because I have to wrok there.
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  • Hanna
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    Hola Ismael, Please use capital letters for proper nouns. Good luck
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