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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1

Describing your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?

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Good morning! May I have a cup of green tea without sugar? I like it best. Also I would like a Sandwich with cheese and tomato, furthermore a glass of orange juice please.

In winter time I like best a hot chocolate with cream :-).
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  • petunie
    Mochapoints: 4210  |  Teacher Score: 1129 (0%)
    Corrections: ... I prefer that best. Also, I would like a sandwich with cheese and tomato, and also, a glass of orange juice, please. In the winter, I prefer hot chocolate with cream :-).
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  • wayofthespoon
    Mochapoints: 1117  |  Teacher Score: 907 (100%)

    I would change "furthermore" to "also."  Or, change the sentence to "I would also like a sandwich, with cheese and tomato, and a glass of orange juice as well." 

    Furthermore in this sentence is not wrong, but awkward and uncommon in this context.
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