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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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Today is Saturday and have some free time. So I go out for a walk to a near park. Have with me a book because its very sunny. I will sit for a while on a bench enjoying the sun and my book.

I do some sports. I like to go by bike in spring and summer time. All over the year I do walking and swimming.
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  • petunie
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    Corrections: Today is Saturday, and I have some free time. I will go for a walk to a nearby park. I will bring a book, because it is very sunny. ... I play some sports. I like to go biking in the spring and summer. All year long, I walk and swim.
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