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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

Jaime's submission: Average Rating:
The woman isn't thin, she's fat. The man is old, he's not young. The boy isn't tall, he's short. The girl isn't old, she's young. You're not fat, you're thin. I'm not old, I'm young.
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  • Virgínia(Gina).
    Mochapoints: 16819  |  Teacher Score: 7390 (100%)
    Muy bien!
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  • JUNIOR CONTROLL...
    Mochapoints: 43921  |  Teacher Score: 35848 (98%)
    Very good! No lugar das vírgulas, sugiro a você utilizar o ponto final para separar as frases. The woman isn't thin. She's fat. The man is old. He's not young. OU The man is old. He isn't young. The boy isn't tall. He's short. The girl isn't old. She's young. You're not fat.You're thin. Ou You aren't fat. You're thin. I'm not old. I'm young. Utilizando a forma contraída. Muito bem! Continue assim!
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