English Writing Exercise

Activities: Today and Yesterday

Using the irregular verbs from this lesson, write sentences in the present continuous and past simple tense about six people: a man and a woman, a boy and a girl, you and me. Ex: A man is swimming in the lake now. A man swam in the lake yesterday.

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Σαρα
My favourite restaurant is a very little place,but it's foods are delicious.
It is a fast-food restaurant.There are lots of sandwich alternatives.My favourite sandwich is shwarma.It is a sandwich that includes meat with yoghurt and lettuce in it.
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Submitted: 2008-10-21 11:15:36




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  • 2008-10-20 10:34:10
    nerminfgr
    good.
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  • 2008-10-20 10:40:58
    KathleenVeronic...
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    Well done Sara. It would be better to say the restaurant is a very small place since we do not normally say very little but just little. another small mistake is you do not use an apostophe in ITS. Excellent. Kahleen
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  • 2008-10-20 12:36:04
    Jonas Sousa
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    corrections: better to say "very small place"; " but its foods" ("its"without apastrophe, because it's genitive case- "of the restaurant"); yogurt. very good my friend...:) see you
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  • 2008-10-20 13:31:14
    Jeff
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    Very good, my only advice would be to double space between sentences.
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  • 2008-10-20 17:43:34
    abbhi
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    very good.
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  • 2008-10-20 22:20:20
    Hendy
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    Be sure to keep space between your period and the next word. Besides some small spelling errors you seem to be doing very well.
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  • 2008-10-21 11:15:36
    Deha
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    Very good,
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