A Shopping Trip
Instructions:
Write about the last time you went shopping. What were you shopping for? What did you buy? Who did you go with?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 4
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my favorite city is Xi'an city. they east is Shanxi province.
they west is Sichuan province.
they south is Henan province.
they north is Neimenggu province.
they west is Sichuan province.
they south is Henan province.
they north is Neimenggu province.
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VuqarMochapoints: 3334 | Teacher Score: 2154 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
VuqarMochapoints: 3334 | Teacher Score: 2154 (0%)
hi You don`t need repeat "city", just: My favorite city is XIAN. they are to the east of Shanxi province. they are to the west of Sichuan province. they are to the south of Henan province. they are to the north of Neimenggu province. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
Ahmad KhalilMochapoints: 404 | Teacher Score: 176 (0%)you can add more sentences than that of the given questions and always try to do this. city -- repeated in the 1st sentense; A is in the west, B in south, ... and Z in the North etc create some change in similar sentences. Good luck Ahmad Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
wordmanMochapoints: 1013 | Teacher Score: 796 (91%)My favorite city is Xi'an. To the east is Shanxi province, west is Sichuan province. Henan province is to the south, and Neimenggu province to the north. Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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