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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 1

My shopping cart

Instructions: Using the words from this lesson, describe the items that can usually be found in your shopping cart or basket. Include the number of units for each grocery item. Ex: two cartons of milk, some vegetables, a dozen eggs.

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oh .so good is a subject! but i want to say this vacation
because i'm no't go to home in this vacation
now i'm staying here of other province. they are a beautiful city
this city is Haikou city of Hainan province in china. my hometown is at Xi'an city of Shanxi province in china. they space is too far .how about 3000 kilometres . i cost 2000 RMB in this vacation.

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  • Jasmine
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    It is good. But you should write This is a beautiful citynaed Haikueof Haimen province in China. Avoid using they at many places. overall satisfactory.....
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    English grammar is so hard, good try. I can understand your main ideas. Some patterns you may want to spend more time on involve (a vs. this, it vs. they, located in vs. is at). Approximately is a good word for your vocabulary instead of 'how about'. Good effort.
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  • wordman
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    Hi, Sky. I hope this helps a little. Oh, such a good subject! But I want to talk about this vacation, because I’m not going home. I’m staying here in another province. This is the beautiful city, Haikou of Hainan Province in China. My hometown is Xi’an of Shanxi province in China. These cities are very far apart, about 3000 kilometers. This vacation costs me 2000 RMB.
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