English Writing Exercise
When and where?
Describe where six people are going and at what time: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The man is going to the restaurant at eight o’clock.
The woman is eating in the dining room at six o'clock. The man is going to the airport at nine o'clock. The girl is walking to the school at eight o'clock. The boy is going to make the phone call at five o'clock. They are going to work at seven o'clock. I am going to the store at twelve o'clock
Submitted: 2008-10-26 17:14:51
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2008-10-23 12:37:02Arrivederla e g...Average rating:
Very good! "The woman is eating IN the dining room at six o'clock." The second "the" isn't needed in the school sentence. "The girl is walking to school at eight o'clock." Do you mean to say that: "The boy is going to MAKE the phone CALL at five o'clock." or that the boy is going to collect the phone? The rest is perfect. Well done.Rate This Review
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2008-10-23 13:27:26DuritaAverage rating:
Well done, Elizabeth. I agree with Helen's correctionsRate This Review 0 0 -
2008-10-23 13:30:49gloriaAverage rating:
Hi, Well done. I have nothing to add to Helen Margaret's correction.Rate This Review 0 0 -
2008-10-24 05:21:00bethAverage rating:
I agree with Helen Margaret too. Maybe, "The boy is going to get A phone at 5:00." (if he is getting a phone that he didn't have before)Rate This Review 1 0
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2008-10-24 17:02:16Kitten, Deb...
I aslo agree with Helen Good luck.Rate This Review 0 0 -
2008-10-24 20:35:08elizabeth
Thanks everyone for your help !Rate This Review 0 0 -
2008-10-26 17:14:51Kitten, Deb...
You are very welcome my dear friend...Rate This Review 0 0
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