English Writing Exercise

When and where?

Describe where six people are going and at what time: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The man is going to the restaurant at eight o’clock.

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elizabeth
The woman is eating in the dining room at six o'clock. The man is going to the airport at nine o'clock. The girl is walking to the school at eight o'clock. The boy is going to make the phone call at five o'clock. They are going to work at seven o'clock. I am going to the store at twelve o'clock

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Submitted: 2008-10-26 17:14:51




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  • 2008-10-23 12:37:02
    Arrivederla e g...
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    Very good! "The woman is eating IN the dining room at six o'clock." The second "the" isn't needed in the school sentence. "The girl is walking to school at eight o'clock." Do you mean to say that: "The boy is going to MAKE the phone CALL at five o'clock." or that the boy is going to collect the phone? The rest is perfect. Well done.
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  • 2008-10-23 13:27:26
    Durita
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    Well done, Elizabeth. I agree with Helen's corrections
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  • 2008-10-23 13:30:49
    gloria
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    Hi, Well done. I have nothing to add to Helen Margaret's correction.
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  • 2008-10-24 05:21:00
    beth
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    I agree with Helen Margaret too. Maybe, "The boy is going to get A phone at 5:00." (if he is getting a phone that he didn't have before)
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  • 2008-10-24 17:02:16
    Kitten, Deb...
    I aslo agree with Helen Good luck.
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  • 2008-10-24 20:35:08
    elizabeth
    Thanks everyone for your help !
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  • 2008-10-26 17:14:51
    Kitten, Deb...
    You are very welcome my dear friend...
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