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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

Aline Maurer's submission: Average Rating:
My friends,

My vacations was on the beach and it was wonderful!!!
When I'm surfing in the morning, I love to see the sunshine reflecting in the waves... It's a sensacional sensation!
I love the sea!
At night I went to the party and I danced a lot, and dronk a lot of tequila!!!
In the other day I wasn't feeling very well, cause I had a hangover!
He he he!!!
This was my vacations!





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  • Rafa
    Mochapoints: 5454  |  Teacher Score: 4302
    Very descriptive. Really a beautiful vacation My friends, My vacation was on the beach and it was wonderful!!! When was surfing in the morning, I loved to see the sunshine reflecting on the waves... It was a sensational experience! I love the sea! At night I went to the party and I danced a lot, and drank a lot of tequila!!! And on the following day I wasn't feeling very well, cause I had a hangover! He he he!!! This was my vacation!
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  • alperb
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    you done well but you need to write "drank" in case of "dronk" and in the last sentence you need to write "this was my vacation" without "s"...
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