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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

Instructions: List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?

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Today is 25th october,2008.It is Saturday.It is an autumn season. It is my favourite season.Today is neither hot nor cold,but drizzling of rain is going on.I am enjoying it. Today is weekend,so I am at home. Tomorrow will be sunday. I seem tomorrow will be the same weather.Already metterlogical office have anounced the weather forcast that due to low pressure drizzling rain will continue .
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  • hassancaj
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    good
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  • dip
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    hello Friend, A lot of thanks to you. I am galdly received your review. Again thanks to you dip
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  • supta
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    Leave a space after putting a full stop (.) then start another sentence. 25 october, 2008 :- leave a space after comma (,) It seem tommrow...............* announced :- is correct. meteorological :- is correct. Well written! Keep it up
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  • dip
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    Hello Supta, I am very galdly received your review. Many many thanks for your correction. dip
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  • Rô Maia
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    Congratulations with your job. Excellent exercise.
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  • maria boullosa
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    GREAT EXERCISE A Few corrections: METEOROLOGICAL ANNOUNCED FORECAST that's all. CONGRATULATIONS MARIA
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  • Aakanksha Agraw...
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    Good attempt.one corrections It seems........
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  • ~Rosie~
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    Today is 25th october,2008.It is Saturday. = Today is October 25th, 2008. It is Saturday. In English we put the month first, then the day. As someone else said, make sure you put a space after commas and two spaces after periods (full stops). It is an autumn season. = It is autumn. OR The season is autumn. Today is neither hot nor cold,but drizzling of rain is going on. = Today is neither hot nor cold, but there is drizzling rain. Today is weekend,so I am at home. Tomorrow will be sunday. = Today is the weekend, so I am at home. Tomorrow will be Sunday. I seem tomorrow will be the same weather. = It seems tomorrow will have the same weather. OR It seems the weather will be the same tomorrow. Already metterlogical office have anounced the weather forcast that due to low pressure drizzling rain will continue . = Already the meterological office has announced the weather forecast, and that due to low pressure the drizzling rain will continue. Good Job!!
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  • dip
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    hello maria Boullosa, Many many thaks to you for revewing my submission. You have rightly indicated spelling mistake and corrected. bye bye Dip
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  • dip
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    Namste Rosie, Many thanks to you for reviewing my submission.You have done a lot. You have spent more time for that. You have clearly corrected my mistake. Bye. Dip
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  • dip
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    Hello Aakanksha, I am very gald to received your reveiw about my submission. Thanks to you. bye Dip
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