English Writing Exercise

Describing your day

Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?

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I like coffee. Everytime I go to a café, I order a cup of coffee.
I Iike both sandwiches and pastries. But I don't like mustard. When I want to eat sandwiches at a café, I have to ask the shop clerk to make them without mustard. Sometimes it's a bit too much trouble for me to ask it. That's why, I order pastries more than I order sandwiches.

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Submitted: 2008-10-30 11:56:05

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2008-10-26 02:54:26
Marji

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Wow! Wonderful! There are two minor changes I would make. First, "but I don't like mustard" cannot stand on its own as a sentence. So, I would change the period after "pastries" to a comma: I like both sandwiches and pastries, but I don't like mustard. Also, no comma is needed in the last sentence after "why." Otherwise, you really did a great job!! Congratulations and keep up the great work!

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2008-10-30 11:56:05
giz

Marji-san, Thank you for your advice！アドバイスをどうもありがとうございました。

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