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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 4

A Shopping Trip

Instructions: Write about the last time you went shopping. What were you shopping for? What did you buy? Who did you go with?

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I went to shopping last night.
I went to buy shoes.
I went for shopping with my girlfriend.
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  • Miryam Rúa Res...
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    Gooddd!!!!!!
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  • neretto
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    I went shopping with my girlfriend.Or you can say--I went to do some shopping with my --- ciao neretto
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  • Roby_it
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    I went shopping last night. or Last night I went shopping. I went to buy a pair of shoes. or I went to buy some shoes. I went shopping with my girlfriend.
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    Very great.
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