What are people doing?
Instructions:
Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. I am eating food at the table. I am not sleeping in bed.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 3
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I am working in the computer.I am not sitting in fornt of the computer.You are reading book on your study room.You are not gossping now. The woman is cooking in the kitchen. the woman is not working in the computer.The man is going office. The man is not chatting in computer.The girl is singing now. She is not standing in the yard.The boy is playing with his friend. He is not reading now.
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Rô MaiaMochapoints: 11033 | Teacher Score: 6138 (100%)Very good your job. Only some mistakes : in front of. gossiping, The man is going to the office. Congratulations. Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate -
maria boullosaMochapoints: 143203 | Teacher Score: 117262 (99%)GREAT EXERCISE,DIP IN FRONT OF you are reading a book or some books IN YOUR ROOM GOSSiPING TO GO TO THE OFFICE TO CHAT IN THE COMPUTER that's all GO ON MARIA Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate -
Lalita518Mochapoints: 5176 | Teacher Score: 482 (0%)This is a good effort. Although there are some spelling mistakes to watch. For example, " You are reading a book in your study room." would be a more accurate sentence. Just watch your spelling as it can change the meaning of a sentence. Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate -
~Rosie~Mochapoints: 6173 | Teacher Score: 3272 (0%)I am working in the computer.= I am working ON the computer. I am not sitting in fornt of the computer. = I am not sitting in FRONT of the computer. You are reading book on your study room. = You are reading A book IN your study room. You are not gossping now. = You are not gossiping now. the woman is not working in the computer. = The woman is not working ON the computer. The man is going office. = The man is going TO THE office. The man is not chatting in computer. = The man is not chatting ON THE computer. otherwise.... ghazab! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
dipMochapoints: 7185 | Teacher Score: 5478Namsta Rosie, your remarks enhance my knowledge about preposition. Thanks for that. dip Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
dipMochapoints: 7185 | Teacher Score: 5478
Hi Rosmaia, A lot of thanks for your Review about my submission. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
dipMochapoints: 7185 | Teacher Score: 5478
Hello Maria, I am very happy that you are clearly indicate the mistake about my submission. Dip Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
dipMochapoints: 7185 | Teacher Score: 5478
hello Lalita, I give you lot of thanks for revewing my submission. dip Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
BUBBAMochapoints: 1289 | Teacher Score: 632 (0%)in front......... good job Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate -
dipMochapoints: 7185 | Teacher Score: 5478
hello Bubba, a lot of thanks to you for revewing my submission. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
liu_yuMochapoints: 2861 | Teacher Score: 73 (0%)hi Dip.Thank you for your proposals Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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