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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

Jenny's submission: Average Rating:
The woman is fat and rich. The man is old and poor. The boy is short and thin. The girl is tall and young. You are old and tall. I am short and thin.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • Clovis
    Mochapoints: 28631  |  Teacher Score: 11525 (100%)
    Muy buen trabajo. Sin errores. Excellent. No mistakes. Sigue asi.
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Ranapratap
    Mochapoints: 118  |  Teacher Score: 18 (0%)

    Dear Jenny,

    Excellent except the word thin ! Thin is the word ,generally used for describing non living objects e.g. thin soup , thin membrane, thin clothing , thin coating , thin lines in drawing etc.etc. for describing a person you can use "slim" in place of thin.....it sounds better !

    Thanks,

    Rana
    Submitted over a year ago
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