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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5

Your last vacation

Instructions: Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?

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I spent my last vacation in a city called Matrooh in Egypt. I spent a week there, and it was a great week. I swam in it's beautiful beaches. I went shopping with my family there, and we baught very nice things. I even made new friends. Matrooh is not far from Alexandria, so I think I will spend my next vacation there too.
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  • mohamed kamel
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    very good
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  • Jess
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    Very well done Nesreen. A couple things I see: 1. I swam AT it's beautiful beaches. 2. ..we bOught very nice things. Have fun on your next vacation! Good work!
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  • Evan Ashima
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    good effort!!
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  • yassu27
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    VERY GOOD NESREEN
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  • vania nuñez cor...
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    I like your exposition ,your holidays were very nice,in my case I spend my vacation in the north of my country is similar to desert,I like your country,is exotic and very beautiful culture.
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  • asif
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    Nice, writing nasreen, keep it up.

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  • SMILE
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    well done

    On my last vacation I went to a city called Matrooh in Egypt. Really, I spent a great week over there. I swam in its beautiful beaches. I went shopping with my family and we bought very nice things. I even made new friends. Matrooh is not far away from Alexandria, so I think I will spend my next vacation over there too.

     

    Good luck
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