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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 5

Directions to your house

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, provide directions for a guest from the nearest bus stop to your house. Which direction should your guest go? Where should he turn? What will he see on his way to your house? How will he recognize your house?

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THE NAME THAT SCHOOL I LEARN THERE ACCTULLY I DON'T REMEMBER CLEARLY BUT I THINK IT WAS AZAR.I GRADUATED FROM HIGH SCHOOL IN 1988.BUT I CONTINUE MY STUDY IN THE UNIVERSITY AND GRADUATED IN 1998.MY SUBJECT IN THE UNIVERSITY WAS INDASTERIAL MANAGER .AND AT THIS MOMENT I WORK IN THE FAMOUSE FACTORY IN MY TOWN AND I AM SATISFIED FROM WORK AND MY LIFE.
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  • nicolestar
    Mochapoints: 1029  |  Teacher Score: 127 (0%)
    Your paragraph is a great attempt. There are a few misspelled words and the flow can be improved to sound more fluent. I have retyped your paragraph below to sound fluent to me. I do not clearly remember the name of the school I attended but I think it was Azar. I graduated from high school in 1988 and graduated from university in 1998. I studied industrial management and currently work at a famous factory in my town. I am satisfied with work and my life.
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