Describe your day
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from the lessons, describe your trip to work or school. How long does it take to get there? How far do you have to go? How much does it cost?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 3
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I have a sister who is 5 years older than me. But, because she is shorter than me and never wears make-up, people often mistake her as my younger sister. My mother is a hairdresser and still working even after she turned 70 years old. My father is also very energetic and still keeps his business as an accountant. He already turned 80 years old but never has any gray hair.
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George ジョージMochapoints: 4826 | Teacher Score: 2532 (0%)excellent, after the word "But", the comma needs to be removed. There should not be a pause there. I would recommend that your put the word "is" after "My mother is a hairdresser and" is "still working....." Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate -
Steven LeeMochapoints: 8931 | Teacher Score: 1827 (75%)so good! Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate -
Masaki Uchida =...Mochapoints: 3837 | Teacher Score: 1324すごいですね。 貴方の岡三とお父さんはすばらしですよ。 anyways, good job! Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate
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