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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

Jharendra Prasa...'s submission: Average Rating:
A park is a place of entertainment. But it doesnot mean the activities which is not social. In the park I buy some pinut and eat. If I have to play in the park I will prefer to play tennis. I will read some stories there if I get time.
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  • marika
    Mochapoints: 1927  |  Teacher Score: 411 (89%)
    You described it very nice. I liked it. I didn't find any mistakes. you are very good at English so I like reading your exercises.
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  • alyssia keys
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    'But it doesnot mean the activities which is not social.' - This sentence has no sense. 'does not' or 'doesn't' - not 'doesnot' 'peanuts' instead of 'pinut'
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  • Anastacia
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    Your grammar knowledge is good.
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  • Laura
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    It would be better to remove the second sentence from this submission, because it is unclear. I would write like this. I usually buy peanuts and eat them in the park. I prefer to play tennis there. ( I have to play means that you don't want to do it, but somebody makes you do it; or you must do it, because your suituation forces to do it. I hope it will help you to understand the meaning of - to have to -. Good luck! :-)
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