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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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When I go to a park , I like to play volleyball with my friends, then when I am tired I prefer read a nice book of economics.
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  • I was here..
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    very good..
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  • I was here..
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    nice..
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  • prayagpathak
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    Good try! "When I go to a park , I like to play volleyball with my friends." This sentence is perfect. I suggest, you should keep a full stop after that. Then...., try to use 'After that' instead of 'then' in the sentence, "then when I am tired I prefer read a nice book of economics." Also use 'get' instead of 'am'and write 'I prefer to read' instead of 'I prefer read'. Okay... On an average, this sentence was really nice. If you have any other problem, feel free to ask me. OK. bye!
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  • Jorge
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    When I go to a park , I like to play volleyball with my friends and when I am tired I prefer read a nice book of economics.
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  • Rafa
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    Great job!!!
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  • Dan_atila
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    Ótimo texto com boa colocação das palavras e simples.... Parabens
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  • Elie
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    that's excellent
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  • mefistófeles
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    I guess you have to say "some nice economics book". great job!
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  • saran
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    good job.....
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  • Rafael
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    good
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  • Ronne Grey
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    buena tarea....
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  • marcosjr7
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    If you meant you prefer to read that book instead of playing volleyball in case you're tired, you could write: "When I go to a park, I like to play volleyball with my friends, but when I am tired I prefer to read a nice book of economics." But if you meant you like to read a book AFTER you've played volleyball and got tired, you can write: "When I go to a park, I like to play volleyball with my friends, and after I get tired of playing I enjoy reading a nice book of economics. "
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  • Pum
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    Exellent!
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  • ROnY_MC
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    Congratulations! but just a note about that: " I like TO PLAY" the better is " I like PLAYING "

     

     

    take care
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  • J. Santana
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    Good!
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    Good.
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  • aliq8
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    great
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  • يوسف
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    hello

    i think what are you doing is very good

                  with all my regards

                         yusuf atar

                              
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  • Subrata
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    EXCELLENT. Please see Prayag's & marco's remark
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