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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 1

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.

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A flowers is on the table ..candy is in the box
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  • aim4theHeart
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    You might want to reread the directions again. you're supposed to write sentences about some objects on a table and some objects in a box.

    incorrect: A flowers is on the table ..candy is in the box

    correct: the flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.

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  • nicko 윤시혜
    Mochapoints: 24251  |  Teacher Score: 18566 (98%)

    u need to describe another set of objects on the table and in the box, not copy the given example. eg:

    The pencil is on the table.

    The books are in the box.

    The lamp is on the table.

    The bag is in the box.

     

    keep it up^^jia you^^

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