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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 2

Giving and Receiving

Instructions: Describe a present you have received. What was it? Who did you get it from? Is there something you gave in return?

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This is the flower, my friend is giving to me. I will be giving a present to him. This is the airplane ticket, my father is giving to me. The baby is giving a kiss to me. My brother is giving a computer to me.
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    Come on! This is the flower, which was my friend gave to me. This is the airplane ticket, which was my father gave to me.
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    This is the flower [that] my friend is giving to me. I will be giving a present to him. This is the airplane ticket [that] my father is giving to me. The baby is giving a kiss to me. My brother is giving a computer to me. Good work! The comment above by star is grammatically incorrect, so please ignore it.
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    This is the flower,which my friend is giving to me.I will give a present to him.This is a airplane ticket that my father is giving to me.The baby is giving a kiss to me.My brother is giving a computer to me.
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