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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 3

Activities: Today and Yesterday

Instructions: Using the irregular verbs from this lesson, write sentences in the present continuous and past simple tense about six people: a man and a woman, a boy and a girl, you and me. Ex: A man is swimming in the lake now. A man swam in the lake yesterday.

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My favourite restaurant has everything that I like eating. All kinds of food are served there. Here are: Carne de sol, suvaco de cobra, macaxeira, frutos do mar, sopas e caldos, farofas, etc.

There are typical foods that brazilians like eating and I am with them. Particularly, I like beans and rice, pasta, roast beef or beef, potatoes, a lot of greens and some juice. Of course I change my menu from time to time.

I am not a fat guy but when I go out I look like a chubby.

Fortunately, I do exercises.


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  • Rommel
    Mochapoints: 67591  |  Teacher Score: 52023 (100%)
    favorite there are carnes etc
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  • Léia
    Mochapoints: 3392  |  Teacher Score: 1435 (100%)
    Instead of "here are", you could say, "they are"...."like eating and I am with them"you should say"like eating and so do I" .
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  • Iva Vedder
    Mochapoints: 225  |  Teacher Score: 76 (0%)
    Very goog! But we cam improve it: "All kinds of food are served there like: carne de sol..." In most situations we don't translate typical food's names, but you can say "sea food" = "frutos do mar"
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  • Leemoy
    Mochapoints: 770  |  Teacher Score: 58 (0%)
    Tem um erro de ortografia crasso. Qualquer substantivo/adjetivo patrio deve ser escrito com letra maiuscula. Brazilian, Chinese, Jamaican, Peruvian, etc. Algumas frases ficaram meio sem sentido como "a lot of greens", "There are typical foods that brazilians like eating and I am with them." "I am not a fat guy but when I go out I look like a chubby." Nessa frase seria melhor escrever : I am not fat but I eat like a chubby." No geral está bom.
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  • Esther
    Mochapoints: 241  |  Teacher Score: 17 (0%)
    i think it's ok , continue :)
    Submitted over a year ago

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