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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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i love skating in the park. I going to the park very often, i skating and i talk to my girlfrend. I using play roller hochey but i don´t now. i go to it when there are not so much people, because i dislike when there are a lot people.
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  • Carl
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    (I) love skating in the park. I (go) to the park very often(.) (I) skate and () talk to my girlfrend. I (used to) play roller (hockey) but I don´t now. (I) (prefer to) go () when there are not so (many) people, because i dislike it when there are a lot people. Many mistakes sorry, but continue trying. Carl
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  • Neda
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    I love skating in the park. I GO to the park very often, I SKATE and TALK to my GIRLFRIEND. I USED TO play roller hochey but i don´t(DO IT) now. I PREFER TO go THERE when there are not so MANY people, because i dislike IT when there are a lot people. bravo mi amigo! try to write more! and pay attention to your mistakes! keep it up! good luck!
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  • Gustavo
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    I i love skating in the park. I going go to the park very often. , i  I skating skate  and  I i talk to my girlfrend. I using used to  play roller hochey but  I i don´t now. I  i go  to the park it when there are not so much many people there, because I i dislike it when there are a lot people.

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    I love skating in the park. I go to the park very often.   I skate  and  I talk to my girlfrend. I used to  play roller hochey but  I don´t now. I  go to the park when there are not so many people there  because I dislike it when there are a lot people.

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  • Anna Isabella
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    Buen trabajo Diegus, pero estan unos errores. Esto es como lo debe ser:

    "I love skating in the park. I go to the park very often, to skate and talk to my girlfriend. I used to play roller hockey but I don't now. I go there when there aren't many people, because I dislike when there are a lot of people."

    Sigue con su esfuerzos! :]
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