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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

elaine's submission: Average Rating:
have a happy honeymoon!i want to go beijing on the next wednsday.
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  • tylerxx0611
    Mochapoints: 335  |  Teacher Score: 8 (0%)
    There needs to be a spaces between puntuation marks and new sentences. Wednesday is spelled wrong. In english, just say, "I want to go to Beijing next Wednesday." but other than that, not bad.
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • sukhbir
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    wednesday  (spelling mistake)

     

     
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