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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 3

Activities: Today and Yesterday

Instructions: Using the irregular verbs from this lesson, write sentences in the present continuous and past simple tense about six people: a man and a woman, a boy and a girl, you and me. Ex: A man is swimming in the lake now. A man swam in the lake yesterday.

Jharendra Prasa...'s submission: Average Rating:
I usually go to the Nanglo Bakery cafe which is in the heart of Kathmandu city. It is a famous restaurant for aliens. I like chicken sekuwa. This restruant offers good qualities foods for customer. In Nanglo restaurant we can get Pizza, cold drinks, boil items of meat and foods. Nepali Thali is also famous for aliens. Thakili Bhansha is famous for Nepalese customer. Generally Nepalese Citizen likes to eat Daal and Bhat (Rice -Pulse) with curry. It is different one for servicing various types of foods. So I like it very much.
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  • Kriszti
    Mochapoints: 5611  |  Teacher Score: 428
    I think: "good quality of food (food is collective noun it hasn't got plural" "Nepalese citizens like to eat" I didn't understand exactly what did you wan't to say with the sentence before the last sentence. Be good. Bye Kriszti
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  • Anastacia
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    Nice work! But review this sentence: "It is different one for servicing various types of foods." I think you meant: This dish is one of the variety in serving. (or something like this) Good luck!
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  • alyssia keys
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    Good, but: 'It offers food of good quality...' 'Generally, Nepalese citizens like to eat...(plural form) 'It is different for one ...'
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  • Laura
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    Good work. Look at my corrections, please. The restaurant offers very good food... In the Nanglo restaurant we can have pizza, cold drinks and great variety of meaty dishes. Nepaly Thali is also famous for its dishes ( food ). The grammatical structure is - to be famous for something - . Nepalese citizens like to eat ( eating ) daal and bhat ( rice and pulse ) with curry. I didn't understand the last but one sentence. What did you mean? Good luck! :-)
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