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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the weather

Instructions: Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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she is wearing hat ,because it's cold and cloudy.
she has umbrella ,because it's rainning.
she is wearing scarf ,because it's snowing .
she is wearing sunglasses,because it's sun and warm.
how is the weather ?it's the rain
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  • Cristiane كرستي...
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    Good. I found a little mistakes: "It´s raining." And you need to start the sentences with capital letter. keep practicing
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  • nyk692
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    need to be corrected... it's sun. -> it's sunny. it's the rain. -> it's raining or it rains
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  • gustavohsqueiro...
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    Dont you need to put an article before the substantives? For ex. " ... a umbrella " or "a hat" Could you answer me this?
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  • elaine
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    thanks for your suggestions .i will study hard .
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  • wanda
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    very good
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  • Jyo
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    Use capital letter when you starting,make sure using vowel in appropriate place.
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