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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 4

Describe your best friend

Instructions: Describe your best friend using the vocabulary words from this lesson. What does he or she look like? Does he or she have a unique feature? Do you and your friend have similar features? Ex: My friend has blue eyes and broad shoulders. I do not have blue eyes; I have green eyes.

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Do you ever heard about guaraná? It's one kind of fruit that looks like an eye... people use it to make a kind of soda. It's fantastic! Very good! It's known for a long time ago, the natives brazilians found it in Amazonia's jungle.
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  • Jessejrt
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    Do you ever heard about guaraná?>>Have you ever heard about guaraná? ou Did you ever hear about guaraná? It's known for a long time ago>> It's been known for a long time Did you ever hear about guaraná? It's one kind of fruit that looks like an eye... people use it to make a kind of soda. It's fantastic! Very good! It's been known for a long time, the native(no 's' here) brazilians found it in Amazonian ('s) jungle.
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  • K!
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    haha fruit that looks like an eye... ---> that made me laugh :D and i agree with the person above :D keep it up!
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    I would say: The native Brazilians found it in the Amazon jungle. It's a matter of taste. Keep up the good work!
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