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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 2

What are you doing this week?

Instructions: What are you doing this week? What activities are you doing? When? Which days will be the busiest?

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Today i went to the univerity.
Tomorrow I am studying all day.
The day after tomorrow is wednesday and I am going to visit my relatives.
Thursday I am playing risiko with my friends.
Fryday I am going to shop with my brother.
Saturday night I am going out with my friends.
Sunday I am sleeping all day.
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  • traveler
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    Today I went to the UNIVERSITY. The day after tomorrow is Wednesday, Thursday I am playing Risk (I think that's the name in English) with my friends. Friday I am going to shop You could say Sunday I will sleep all day. Use a capital letter for I and for the days of the week. Watch spelling.
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  • katie
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    Great! I agree with traveler.
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  • Veronica
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    Excellent. However, make sure to always capitalize the pronoun I and the days of the week. university...Friday.
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  • iain492001
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    Hi Agostino Good work, but a few little spelling mistakes, probably typos :- University (I think this should have a capital letter here) , Friday. "I" should ALWAYS have be capitalised irrespective of where it comes in the sentence, whereas the other personal pronouns she/you etc are only capitalised when they are the first word in the sentence. Wednesday - days of the week ALWAYS start with a capital letter. Although the "present continuous" tense - "am going"/"am playing" etc is OK in conversation, for written work when you start talking about activities a few days forward, such as from Thursday onwards, it would be better to use the "future continuous tense" - "will be playing", "will be going", "will be sleeping" Molto bene - continua cosi` Ciao Iain "risiko" or "risk" - perhaps should have a capital "R" as it is the (trademark?) name of a game?
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  • Professor
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    Bravo, Agostino! There are only a few minor errors as the others have pointed out. Overall, you did a very good job!
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  • sgknight
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    Molto bene! Appena alcune correzioni.... "Today I went to the university. Tomorrow I am **(acceptable, but WILL BE is better as this is in the future) studying all day. The day after tomorrow is Wednesday **(in English all the first letter of the days of the week and names of months are capitalized), Thursday I WILL BE **(future) risiko **(if this is a trade or brand name, it should be capitalized also) with my friends. FRIDAY I am going to shop **(future continuous here also, I WILL GO SHOPPING) with my brother. Saturday night I am (technically correct, but again, this is in the future, so WILL is better). Sunday I am sleeping **(future here also, I WILL SLEEP) all day." Personal pronoun I is ALWAYS capitalized. Days of the week and names of months, and holidays - the first letter is ALWAYS capitalized. In English (American), one of the most difficult things is that in casual, informal conversation we are very understanding of what we perceive the speaker to mean. Yet in formal, professional and scholastic communication, written or spoken, the proper grammer usage is expected. I am sure this makes learning the language more difficult, but you are doing very well! Keep up your excellent work! Ciao! Stacey
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    Today I went to the univerSity. Tomorrow I am studying all day. The day after tomorrow is Wednesday and I am going to visit my relatives. Thursday I am playing risiko with my friends. FrIday I am going to shop with my brother. Saturday night I am going out with my friends. Sunday I am sleeping all day. "Fryday" I think you've just solved the problem which I have describing the difference between Italian "i" and English "i". Thank you. Friday is of course spelt with an "i"
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