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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 5

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

Luciano Santos's submission: Average Rating:
Three buildings is not gree.This candle in red and black.This candle in not white.Twelve towels is white and soft. The cake is brown.Five dogs,two girls and four boys. I like cakes.
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  • chelsea19fan
    Mochapoints: 10047  |  Teacher Score: 3791 (100%)
    three buildings are not green. this candle is not white. twelve towels ARE white and soft. this candle is red and black. at least write THERE ARE dogs two girls and four boys.
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  • PriscillaFace
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    I likes cakes too! *Three buildings ARE not GREEN. This candle IS red and black. This candle IS not white. Twelve towels ARE soft and white. THERE ARE five dogs, two girls, and four boys." Muito bom, Luciano!
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  • welton geraldo
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    Three buildings ARE(são) not(aren't) green. This candle is not white. Twelve towels ARE white and soft. (There are) dogS two girls and four boys. Está indo muito bem.
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  • ParacetaMAN
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    Correções: * Three buildings ARE not GREEN. ("are", não "is". Faltou um N no final de GREEN) * This candle IS red. This candle IS not white. (IS, não IN) * Twelve towels ARE white. De resto tá ok. Não esqueça: o verbo SER/ESTAR em inglês é sempre ARE quando no plural. Então, se tem mais de um: "Twelve towels ARE white" (doze toalhas SÃO brancas). "Three buildings ARE not green" (três prédios não SÃO verdes) Dica: na negativa, ARE NOT pode ser abreviado assim: AREN'T (essa é a forma mais usada, ouça a pronúncia dela que eu te gravei) Keep it up, friend! Qualquer coisa, tamos aí.
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  • ElvisAndre
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    You did well, but I found fews mistakes. Three building ARE not GREEN. This candle IS red and black. This candle IS not white. Twelve towels ARE white and soft.
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  • FiSa
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    Nice work in this one!! Go ahead!
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  • Gu$t@v0
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    bem................ na parte "This candle in red and black(...)", vc cometeu um engano. veja: o correto é dizer: This candle IS red and black... vc trocou o verbo por ima preposição. aahh......... outro "mistake"... na parte "Three buildings is not gree(...)", os edifícios (buildings) estão no plural (THREE buildings).......... então o verbo deve seguir isso! então, a forma correta é "Three buildings ARE not(...)"......... o mesmo erro foi cometido na parte "Twelve towels is white (...)"......... o verbo segue a "inclinação".......... bem.....mas eu acho q é só........ vc foi muito bem! parabéns!
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  • Gu$t@v0
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    ei......... eu não me recordo bem.......... mas RATING não é com 2 t's??
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