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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 5

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

tzunami's submission: Average Rating:
I am a student in architecture. When I am a boy I want be a architect or a deejay.
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  • alexallegro
    Mochapoints: 143  |  Teacher Score: 20 (0%)
    When I was a boy, I wanted to be...
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  • csoltas
    Mochapoints: 154  |  Teacher Score: 25 (0%)
    The 2nd sentence should be: "When i was a boy I wanted to be an architect or a DJ" I understand what you are saying, but your grammar is incorrect. The word is spelled DJ; it stands for Disk Jockey. Keep practicing!
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