English Writing Exercise

Describing Objects

Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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tzunami
I am a student in architecture. When I am a boy I want be a architect or a deejay.
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Submitted: 2008-02-19 21:04:31




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  • 2008-02-19 21:04:24
    alexallegro
    When I was a boy, I wanted to be...
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  • 2008-02-19 21:04:31
    csoltas
    The 2nd sentence should be: "When i was a boy I wanted to be an architect or a DJ" I understand what you are saying, but your grammar is incorrect. The word is spelled DJ; it stands for Disk Jockey. Keep practicing!
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