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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4

Going Shopping

Instructions: Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?

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Last time I went shopping was 3 days ago. I bought a hat and gloves. The price was about 1,5 thousands russian roubles (about 60 dollars).
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  • Athlete61
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    Great work.
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  • Rory
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    Good job! The only thing I see is that we use decimals (.) instead of commas (,) when we shorten numbers. So "1,5 thousands" should be "1.5 thousand". (Also note, thousand is singular).
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  • Sam
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    Very good!!! "Thousand" as Fireshper said ;)Very gd!

    Take care!
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    good jop , enjoy
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  • Tito
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    In the hope to help you in your study I guive you and another version of your exercise. The last time that I went shopping was 3 days ago. I bought a hat and a pair of gloves. They cost about one an half thousands russian roubles (about 60 dollars) Good luck!

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     
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    bien :)
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