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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 1

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.

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There in money for foot and candy on the table. The woman is in the car, but the men is in the couch. The foot is on the table and the candies are in the box. The girls is in the chair, but the boy is in the bed. I am at the street, but she is in the house. The managers are in the building and he is the door. The lamp and the caffee are the table. You are on the bus, but I am in my car.
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  • Nogitsune07
    Mochapoints: 8988  |  Teacher Score: 5028 (0%)
    Good work. You some practise using the right pronoun in some sentences: "There is money for FOOD and candy on the table." - Food, not foot. Be careful with spelling. "The woman is in the car, but the men ARE on the couch." - There is more than 1 man, so you must use "are". "The FOOD is on the table and the candies are in the box." "The girls ARE on the chairs, but the boy is in the bed/The girl IS on the chair, but the boy is in the bed." - Be careful about using plurals, and make sure the verb agrees with it. "I am ON the street, but she is in the house." "The managers are in the building and he is BY the door." "The lamp and the coffee are ON the table." Don't forget prepositions (on; at; by; in)! Keep working. You're doing just fine if you keep practising. :)
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  • Zayhe
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    foot or FOOD? Look both up in the dictionary. The GIRLS ARE, the GIRL IS. yOU CAN SAY I AM IN THE STREET. The coffee. Good work keep on practicing.
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  • MiraJ
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    I think the context helps us see that you mean "food" and not "foot". Be sure you have the correct spelling before you use the word. This is a very good example of how one letter changes the meaning. Esto es un buen ejemplo como una letra cambia el significado de una palabra. There IS money for FOOD and candy on the table. The woman is in the car, but the men ARE ON the couch. The fooD is on the table and the candies are in the box. The girl (no "s" because "is" is singular) is in the chair, but the boy is in the bed. --puedes decir "in the chair" cuando hablas de sillas especiales como "rocking chair" o "easy chair". Pero muchas veces decimos "on the chair" cuando no hablamos de un específico tipo de silla. I am ON/IN the street, but she is in the house. --"on" significa que eres al lado de la calle. "in" significa que eres dentro de la calle con los carros, camiones, etc. The managers are in the building and he is AT/BY the door. The lamp and the cOffee are ON the table. Good work. Keep practicing!
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