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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 1

My shopping cart

Instructions: Using the words from this lesson, describe the items that can usually be found in your shopping cart or basket. Include the number of units for each grocery item. Ex: two cartons of milk, some vegetables, a dozen eggs.

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I went to the concert of 'epikhigh'.
It was fantastic~! =]
umm... the concert wasn't far from my home. :)
It's $50
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  • Quetzalcoatl II
    Mochapoints: 71979  |  Teacher Score: 68156 (100%)
    Very good, Hana. I went to the concert of "Epikhigh", lastnight. (yesterday, last month, etc). The concert was fantastic, and it wasn't far from my home. The entrance (ticket, cover) costed me $50. Keep up with the good work. Good luck.
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  • Quetzalcoatl II
    Mochapoints: 71979  |  Teacher Score: 68156 (100%)
    I'm sorry, Hana, but I made a mistake. The verb "cost" it's the same in simple past and present tense. The ticket costs me .....(present tense) The ticket cost me .......(simple past) Bye.
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  • 何那♥
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    < rectify > I went to the concert of "Epikhigh", last month. The concert was fantastic, and it wasn't far from my home. The ticket cost me $50. p.S ) really, thx ~! =D
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