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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 1

Describe your clothes

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what you are wearing right now. What is it made of? How do you usually dress for work? What do you wear when you go to events and parties? What is your favorite outfit?

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hi, dear friends, my hometown in ji'an city Jiangxi province China. Welcome to my hometown. There have a Wentianxiang memorial. If you come here, you will learn a lot about Wentianxiag's story.
In Jiujiang city Jiangxi province, I recommend you to visit Lu Mountain Falls. A Chinese ancient poet of Li Bai who once described the Lu Mountain Falls:
The sunlit Censer peak exhales a wreath of cloud;
Like an upended stream the cataract sounds loud.
Its torrent dashes down three thousand feet from high;
As if the Silver River fell from azure sky.
In China, there are many, many tourist attractions, I hope the world of people will be able to travel to visit China.


Thank you help me to study English.
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  • Tracy
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    Hi, Dear Friends, My hometown is Ji'an City, Jiangxi Provence, China. There is a Wentianxiang memorial. or It has a Wentianxiang memorial. ... recommend you visit Lu Mountain Falls. An ancient Chinese poet of Li Bai once described the Lu Mountain Falls: I hope everyone will be able to come and visit China. Thank you for helping me to study English.
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  • Blackbird
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    Hi (or hello) dear friends, my hometown is in ji'an city, Jiangxi province, China. Welcome to my hometown. There is (OR We have a) a Wentianxiang memorial. If you come here, you will learn a lot about Wentianxiag's story. In Jiujiang city, Jiangxi province, I recommend that you visit Lu Mountain Falls. A Chinese ancient poet of Li Bai, once described the Lu Mountain Falls: The sunlit Censer (DO you mean.. CENTER??.....) peak exhales a wreath of clouds; Like an upended stream, the cataract sounds loud. Its torrent dashes down three thousand feet from high above; As if the Silver River fell from the azure sky. In China, there are many, many tourist attractions. I hope people of the world will be able to travel and visit China. Thank you for helping me to study English. (This was difficult for me because I am not familiar with the things & places that you described.... I tried to keep my corrections as simple as possible....I hope this was of help to you...Blackbird)
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  • kelin
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    Sounds like a very interesting place. .......... Begin with a capital letter. "Hi dear friends,..." ............. You have had some good comments given already. I will only give you this site to help you write complete sentences. http://tillyer.net/GLOW/fsi176.htm
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