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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 3

Describing Objects

Instructions: Using one positive and one negative statement, describe six objects (a car, a flower, a coin, a tree, a house, a purse). Ex. The house is black. It is not white.

Gabriela.BRAsiL's submission: Average Rating:
The woman has a purse gold.She is not purse silver.
The truck is the man.It is not woman.
The bed of girl is pink.The bed is not yellow.
the table brown is the boy.The table is not girl.
You have a black car.The car is not blue.
The dog black is my.The dog is not brown.
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  • Ardıl
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    you must study so much. :(
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  • nej
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    Good attempt, but still to improve......Best of Luck. The woman has purse a purse of Gold, or the woman has purse with Gold. Or if your intenetion was to tell about a golden purse; then it can be written as: The woman's purse is golden, it is not silver.......
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  • Talia
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    Ok, you made a very good attempt and just a few things to work on :) Adjectives in English go before the noun ex. it is gold purse not purse gold. So, this is how it should have been written. The woman has a gold purse. Her purse is not silver. The man drives a truck? I'm not sure. The girl's bed is pink, the bed is not yellow. The boy is on/near/close to a brown table? The girl is not? You have a black car, the car is not blue. The black dog is mine. The dog is not brown. So good effort and do not get discouraged. Keep working on it! :)
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  • abbhi
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    Good Try. Agree with Talia.
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  • André Baesso
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    Very, very good!!! Is perfect...
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