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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the weather

Instructions: Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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Today it's raining and cold and the woman is wearing a raincot.
Yesterday it was windy and he wore a scarf.
Tomorrow is going to snowing and I am wearing a coat and a hat.
The day after tomorrow it will be cloudy. You must bring an umbrella.
Friday it will be warm. He will be wearing a jacket.
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  • Arrivederla e g...
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    Brilliant! Today it's raining and cold and the woman is wearing a raincoAt. Yesterday it was windy and he wore a scarf. Tomorrow IT is going to snowing and I WILL BE wearing a coat and a hat. The day after tomorrow it will be cloudy. You must bring an umbrella. Friday it will be warm. He will be wearing a jacket. Only one spelling mistake - raincoAt.
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  • Ellen
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    Hi Agostino, I agree with what Helen Margaret says below. Just a couple additional corrections: You need a comma between two phrases when you use "and", "but", "or" etc., if the two phrases can be complete and independent sentences. For example, in your first sentence: "Today it's raining and cold, and the woman is wearing a raincoAt." Also, correct the 3rd sentence (verb "snowing") as follows: "Tomorrow IT is going to SNOW, and I WILL BE wearing a coat and a hat. Good job--minor mistakes! Ellen
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  • traveler
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    raincoat. Tomorrow it is going to snow OR Tomorrow it is going to be snowy OR Tomorrow is going to be snowy ("to snowing" is wrong) and I will be wearing a coat and a hat.
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  • KathleenVeronic...
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    Today it`s raining and cold and the woman is wearing a RAINCOAT. Tomorrow IT is going to BE snowing and I will be wearing a coat and a hat. Good work Agostino.
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  • sgknight
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    Eccellente!!! Sono d'accordo con quelli che hanno commentato prima.
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  • Professor
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    Great work as usual, Agostino. And as usual, I am the last person to comment so there is nothing left for me to say! :-(
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  • iain492001
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    Excellent work, Agostino - just a few minor corrections and suggestions. Keep up the good work Ciao Iain Today it's raining and cold and the woman is wearing a raincoAt. Yesterday it was windy and he wore a scarf. Tomorrow IT is going to snow and I WILL wear a coat and a hat. The day after tomorrow it will be cloudy. You must bring an umbrella. Friday (it) will be warm. He will be wearing a jacket.
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  • linda A
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    raincoat. it's going to snow and I will wear a coat and a hat. The rest is fine!!!
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