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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1

Describing your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?

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I order at a cafe orange juice and a candy. When I'm hungry I order a sandwich.
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  • SpencerNY
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    At a cafe i order orange juice and candy
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  • Bill Barnhill
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    Very good, Tanya!

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  • chongkw
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    I order a glass of orange juice and some candy at the cafe. When I'm hungry I like to order a sandwich to eat.....Good.

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  • Nathan Yates
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    Good work!

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    Good.  I think most everybody made some decent suggestions.

    I order orange juice and a candy at a cafe. When I'm hungry, I order a sandwich.

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