English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 5

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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I am a student
when i was child my dream was Business woman

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Thamer

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i= I (always capital) was Business woman= was to be a Business woman good job keep it up :)

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good job but you need moor writting

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I am a student when I was child I dreamt that I will be a Business woman

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