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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 5

Famous Landmarks

Instructions: Where did you go on your last vacation? Did you see any famous landmarks? What other types of interesting sites did you see?

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when i was a young man i came to malaysia .i came here with airplane . i always like to go to trip with airplane because i like to see airport. i like to see all around the world with my friends. i have a car and sometimes i go to visit island near here because there are a lot of great island near to here. i know i have to enjoy my life then i always go to different trip with my family or friends.
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  • Asya
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    Hello! Here are some corrections I came here by airplane. I like to travell by plane because i like to ... .....because there are a lot of great islands near. ......enjoy my life so I always go to different trips with my family or friends.
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  • Echo How
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    when I was a young man I came to malaysia. I came here BY airplane . I always GO ON tripS BY airplane because I like to see airport. I like GOING all around the world with my friends. I have a car and sometimes I go to visit island near here. There are a lot of great islandS near here. I enjoy my life then I always go ON different tripS with my family or friends. GOOD JOB, JAHAN. GO ON.
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    Pay attention on previous comments!
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