Describe an area in your city
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 4
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My face is oval, my skin is white, my hair is black and long. I have not facial hair, because I am woman and I am not a female wolf. I have big eyes in black.
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Muy bien! Muy graciosa!
A few little corrections for you:
I have big, black eyes.
"I do not have facial hair" or " I have no facial hair" y esto es bueno - no?
Exelente.
"I have not facial hair" is ok, but, it is much better to say, "I do not have facial hair."
Also, "I have big, black eyes."
Good luck!
I have just seen: you have not described a 'busy street' in your exercise but you!